题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分。

Now I want to share some tips on my learning English to you. What really help me is watching English TV programs and film. They don’t have to be anything really difficult. I would like to suggest that you can start with a children’s show you had already seen. On the one hand, you know what is happening. You can concentrate on writing down useful words and phrases or repeating that is said. On other hand, you can hear English speak in a more natural way. In my opinion, I will learn much faster but benefit a lot more if you do so.