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评析英语作文生活中有苦也有乐.我们可以尽情的享受乐,但遇到困难是我们应该怎麽做呢?请以“Believe youself,
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评析英语作文
生活中有苦也有乐.我们可以尽情的享受乐,但遇到困难是我们应该怎麽做呢?请以“Believe youself,and you will win”为题,写一篇短文,描述自己在学习生活中遇到困难并战胜它的过程.不少于70词.
我写的（无任何语法错误,但15分只得了5分）：
Believe youself,and you will win
There are many diffculties in my life.Last month ,Igot "c"in a English test,I was very nervous.And I cried in my bedroom.I was crying whenmy mom came in.she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe myself.And I was more hard-working.Next,she helped me with my English.Then I got good greads in next English text,I was very pleasant.And I know,if I believe myself,I will win!
为什麽会减5分,请说明原因,还有这类英语作文该如何写?
评析英语作文
生活中有苦也有乐.我们可以尽情的享受乐,但遇到困难是我们应该怎麽做呢?请以“Believe youself,and you will win”为题,写一篇短文,描述自己在学习生活中遇到困难并战胜它的过程.不少于70词.
我写的（无任何语法错误,但15分只得了5分）：
Believe youself,and you will win
There are many diffculties in my life.Last month ,Igot "c"in a English test,I was very nervous.And I cried in my bedroom.I was crying whenmy mom came in.she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe myself.And I was more hard-working.Next,she helped me with my English.Then I got good greads in next English text,I was very pleasant.And I know,if I believe myself,I will win!
为什麽会减5分,请说明原因,还有这类英语作文该如何写?
生活中有苦也有乐.我们可以尽情的享受乐,但遇到困难是我们应该怎麽做呢?请以“Believe youself,and you will win”为题,写一篇短文,描述自己在学习生活中遇到困难并战胜它的过程.不少于70词.
我写的（无任何语法错误,但15分只得了5分）：
Believe youself,and you will win
There are many diffculties in my life.Last month ,Igot "c"in a English test,I was very nervous.And I cried in my bedroom.I was crying whenmy mom came in.she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe myself.And I was more hard-working.Next,she helped me with my English.Then I got good greads in next English text,I was very pleasant.And I know,if I believe myself,I will win!
为什麽会减5分,请说明原因,还有这类英语作文该如何写?
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