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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方Dear Li Hua,
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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to hear that you are going to study in Canada.And I have some advice for you.It's always a bit cold in November in Canada.So you had better take some warm clothes,or you will have a cold easily.You will live with a Canadian family.So remember some habits like these.First,you have to knock at the door before you enter someone's room.Second,when you need to use the phone,you should ask if you can do that .Third,be polite to other and talk with them if possible.If you have some important things,you must always carry them with you or keep them in the bank.It's much safer.Just take it easy,you will have a great time.
作文要求是这样的:我的朋友李华将要去加拿大做交流生,希望询问我一些注意事项.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to hear that you are going to study in Canada.And I have some advice for you.It's always a bit cold in November in Canada.So you had better take some warm clothes,or you will have a cold easily.You will live with a Canadian family.So remember some habits like these.First,you have to knock at the door before you enter someone's room.Second,when you need to use the phone,you should ask if you can do that .Third,be polite to other and talk with them if possible.If you have some important things,you must always carry them with you or keep them in the bank.It's much safer.Just take it easy,you will have a great time.
作文要求是这样的:我的朋友李华将要去加拿大做交流生,希望询问我一些注意事项.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to hear that you are going to study in Canada.And I have some advice for you.It's always a bit cold in November in Canada.So you had better take some warm clothes,or you will have a cold easily.You will live with a Canadian family.So remember some habits like these.First,you have to knock at the door before you enter someone's room.Second,when you need to use the phone,you should ask if you can do that .Third,be polite to other and talk with them if possible.If you have some important things,you must always carry them with you or keep them in the bank.It's much safer.Just take it easy,you will have a great time.
作文要求是这样的:我的朋友李华将要去加拿大做交流生,希望询问我一些注意事项.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
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