题目内容：

高手帮我改改英语作文,很少.
\x05In the picture,the boy is playing a computer with exciting expression,
\x05Today this scene is very commen in adolescence,
\x05As a day by day development of science,Computer has became a necessary in our daily life,
\x05absolutely,every coin has its two sides………
（图是一个少年在玩电脑游戏,文字是电脑比爸妈亲） 我这样开头行吗、.语法错的帮改下