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英语帮忙修改文章错误
这个是我自己写,但是老师说过我很中式英语,所以不敢拿上台
I hear a story about two man.one called knife,and one called fork.They were killer and no one can destroied them.They're so strong if they were together.So the government were very cared about them.
One day ,knife asked fork to a place and talked .Actually,they were brothers.A long time ago,their parents has been killed.They swore to killed the murderer.
Yes ,they were not believed this world again.
Knife found the murderer from their parents.He quickly to asked fork to remembered to with him to kill the murderer.Fork was really excited about that.But they were also famous killer,they could not stay together.
AT night,Fork has be killed by the government
Next day,Knife went to the murderer's house quickly.But he didn't see the Fork.When he was thinking about this,he heard a noice.It was the gun's.It must be the murderer's gun,but when he looked inside the house,he saw many police from the government.
He was dead
Some one said,Is the Fork to betray the knife.But no one know.Actrally the government are know their move at early
At the nether world,they're not brother anymore,they are personal enemy forever
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