题目内容：

检查一下这篇文章有没有什么错误（格式,语法,是否符合美国人的说话习惯）
13 torch Rd.,
Jiulongpo Area,
Chongqing,
China.
4th April ,2010
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m very glad to you can read this letter.I’m Tiffany,sixteen years old.I'm studying in Senior One at Chongqing Foreign Languages School.I’m a happy and outging girl.I have a lot of friends.I like traveling,reading the books,listening music,seeing the moves,playing with my friend and so on.I love to sharing happiness and sorrows with my friends.I joined the summer camp in America in order to improve my English as well as learn more about American culture.
I live in Chognqing ,Cina with my parents.I’m love my parents.We often play badminton ,go to the park for fun and go shopping at weekends.Chongqing,the city I lived in is a beautiful place,it surrounded by mountains and rivers.I love my school very much.my school is very beautiful,I often take part in various activities organized by the school.
I am glad to be here with your family.Thanks for accepting me as one of your family members.I hope we will have a good time together in the month.
Best whishs
Tiffay