题目内容：

（急!On my first school day this term,
On my first school day this term,my new English teacher enters the classroom .I soon found that she was the beautiful girl with a big smile no her face .First ,she introduced her .Then she asked us introduce ourselves in turn with English .When it was my turn ,I felt so shyly that I didn't dare to Say a word .She came up to me and told me not be afraid of ."Just have a try "she encouraged .Hear this I slowly calmed down .Finally ,I managed to speak ,but did it quite well .She praised me for my progresses .How happy I was then

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第一行 enters改成entered
第二行 the改成a no her face改成on her face introduced her改成introduced herself
第三行 introduce改成to introduce so shyly改成shy
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