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初三英语作文修改
friends are essential in our life.of course,i have good friends.having problems with our friends is common.they are sometimes caused by a small thing.so i think the best way to deal with problems is to talk with your friends patiently. usually,a faithful apology will help you and your friends be better. friendship is forever.i shall get on well with my friends.
老师给我评分17分,结构分扣1分,谁帮我看看怎么样才能拿到这一分,谢谢
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生活中朋友是很重要的.每个人都有很多好朋友,我也是.尽管我与朋友之间常常出问题,但那都是小事.所以,我会和朋友有好地说来处理问题.当然,有时候最好是加上真诚的道歉.这也是维持友谊的好办法,我会跟我的好朋友好好相处,因为友谊是永恒的.
这个是我根据你的作文翻译过来后,加了逻辑结构调整之后的.
这也是维持友谊的好办法 这句话是没有的 我后加的 THIS ID THE BEST WAY TO HOLD OUR FRENDSHIP.其余的 都是你的原文,一定注意链接词,如但是,如果,尽管,这样的词.
翻译过来,你一定可以拿高分了.加油
friends are essential in our life.of course,i have good friends.having problems with our friends is common.they are sometimes caused by a small thing.so i think the best way to deal with problems is to talk with your friends patiently. usually,a faithful apology will help you and your friends be better. friendship is forever.i shall get on well with my friends.
老师给我评分17分,结构分扣1分,谁帮我看看怎么样才能拿到这一分,谢谢
优质解答
这个是我根据你的作文翻译过来后,加了逻辑结构调整之后的.
这也是维持友谊的好办法 这句话是没有的 我后加的 THIS ID THE BEST WAY TO HOLD OUR FRENDSHIP.其余的 都是你的原文,一定注意链接词,如但是,如果,尽管,这样的词.
翻译过来,你一定可以拿高分了.加油
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