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如何完成文章写作中的个人建议

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有关表达“个人建议”的文章是开放式或半开放式作文,个人建议的表达实际上是在写作中体现“个性”发挥的一个有效形式.要注意以下几个方面的问题：一、事实情况的叙述与建议的提出要有自然的衔接或过渡.1. 根据写作提示,经过仔细的审题,将具体的现实状况描写清楚,可以作为建议提出的基础或根据,增加建议的合理性、针对性和可信度. 2. 事实与建议的衔接方式可以是一个词,如：so,then等,也可以是短语或句子结构,如：in that case,for fear that,in this way等；在提出多个建议时,它们之间要有自然过渡或意义递进的词语(组),常见的有furthermore,what’s more,on the other hand,on the contrary,in others words,after all,not only … but also等.二、建议写作的语言要中肯、诚实.提出的建议除了要具有科学性外,还要体现作者诚实的态度和严谨的写作风格.有时,还有必要加上一些提示性的语言,以表明是作者引用别人的思想或作者自己的想法,避免建议的独断或不合理性.例如,可以借用下面的表达方法：in my opinion,as far as I am concerned,according to somebody’s theory,study shows that,as you can see等.【例题展示】2008年北京奥运之后,越来越多的人喜爱和重视体育运动.然而你们班有些同学不以为然,他们认为运动是浪费时间,它消耗精力和体力,影响学习.请你根据自己的理解,从体育运动的意义入手,劝告他们积极参加体育运动,并给出合理的建议.词数要求：120-150.【经典范文】Nowadays, especially after the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more people are paying much more attention to their health, and sports are becoming increasingly popular. Though sports and games cost some time, they benefit people in many ways. They provide people with exercise and enjoyment, and make us strong and healthy. In many sports and games, perseverance and teamwork are trained while we are playing. Furthermore, sports and games are a source of entertainment, and people have a lot of fun in playing them. All in all, sports and games are good for people’s health, study and character training.You can arrange sports and work properly or just do some simple exercise in your spare time. On the other hand, even if it is only a walk after dinner, it will still have the same effect on your health as a football match.【点评】1. 总体评价习作写得比较好.文章结构清晰,观点鲜明,主题突出.作者先总体介绍运动的发展情况,接着运用丰富的语言,从各个方面叙述了运动的积极意义,阐述了作者的观点,提出了合理的建议.句子与句子之间衔接自然,行文连贯.因此全文成功的达到了预期的写作目的,将基本信息很好地传达给了读者.但是文章同时也存在一些选词或用句等方面的错误.2. 亮点 ①开篇观点鲜明,表达准确.more and more people are paying much attention to their health 和sports are becoming increasingly popular等这些精辟的语句,被用来引入健康和运动的话题,非常恰当.第二段的首句Though sports and games may cost some time, they benefit people in many ways. 作为全段的主题句,起到了很好的概括作用.②叙述中furthermore,on the other hand等过渡词（短语）的使用,使得文章层次分明,衔接自然,并有逐级递进的感觉.也充分体现了作者扎实的语言基础和娴熟的语言驾御能力.