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my last birthday作文
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My last birthday
Today is June 3rd and it is my birthday. i remembered my parents bought a supring present for me on my last birthday. they took me to the cinema to see a cartoon film. it was so cool and I want to see it again. we ate a very big cake at home with my friends. i was so happy. after supper, my father taught me to ride a bike. I fell down many times, but i was lucky because i didn't break my leg. I will remember last birthday forever.

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你改几处错误就行了啊。这种句子应该可以的。你改简单一点吧。

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好吧