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帮忙评一下分,高中英语作文
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括：1.时间：周五晚八点至九点
2,地点：学生俱乐部
3,内容：生日歌,蛋糕,游戏


Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming' birthday(开头已给出）
I’m writing to invite you to the party.And there is something significant you should know:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday.It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour.Besides,it will include singing berthday song,eat cake,as well as playing game.We hope that you will accept our invitation and carry a present if it is convenient for you.
You're welcome to come to the great ball.
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